Chapter 1

This is the very first page of my very first very rough draft of my very first book. It will change dramatically but I felt I should post something, kind of a commitment. I don't know. This is very different then the one or two page things i usually write. Please tell me what you think. Is it a good start?

Chapter 1



“He's not going to fuck you for three hours Judy.” Mrs. Jensen said.
“Well, it's my time isn't it? Hello!” Judy said.
“Judy,” Mrs. Jensen exhales,”No, that's not how it goes. It's more of an experience. Some dinner, wine, maybe a massage. Look Judy, if you just want to get fucked, go pick up a guy at a bar. Daniel is a gentleman and will treat you like a lady. Then like a woman. Got it? Didn't Stella tell you that?”
“No, actually she didn't. She really didn't say much at all, the prude. Stella just said it was money well spent. Then she smiled.” Judy said.
“That's good. She shouldn't have told you that. Are you interested or not? My calendar is filling up already.” Mrs. Jensen said.
“I'll think about it some more and call you back okay?” Judy asked.
“No Judy, not really. You need to make an appointment, one you can keep because you are going to pay in advance and there are no refunds, or you can lose the number.” Mrs. Jensen said.
“Wow. Okay. Very interesting.” Judy paused. Judy could hear Mrs. Jensen on the other end tapping a pen or something. “Okay fine I'll do it! Bill's going to Philadelphia on Thursday.”
“Thursday's not good, swim meet. Unless you can do it later in the evening?” Mrs. Jensen said.
“Can't be too late because Joey will come home from his friends house, can you imagine? Judy said.
“Dammit Judy! Make it happen. Why don't you get a hotel room? Dan can pick you up and drop you off after if you want, but it's on the clock.” Mrs. Jensen said.
“I don't know. I want to but...” Judy said.
“But nothing. You've made it this far, let's close the deal right now.” Mrs. Jensen said.
“You can be a hard lady, you know that? Okay. Alright. Make the appointment. I'll make it happen. Maybe Joey can spend the night at his friends house.” Judy said, “What now?”
“I will stop by tomorrow morning and get the money on the way to the school. Cash.” Mrs. Jensen said,” And I will go over the rules.”
“Rules? What do you mean?” Judy said. She didn't get a reply except the beep from the cell phone. Mrs. Jensen had already hung up.

Mrs. Patricia Jensen added the appointment to her calendar on her cell phone and updated the device. It would automatically update the web based software and link with Daniel Jensen's matching phone. Her husband and business partner would now be notified that there was a change on the calendar application and he would plan accordingly. Mrs. Jensen did her job and Mr. Jensen would do his. Mrs. Jensen then entered her class room as the bell rang and told her students to sit down, and quiet down.